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Categories Literature > Poetry > Romantic > Teen or Young Romance > Open


I learn the hard way
And bare the scars i've earned
Always showing my strength
Never a weakness

But the blade in your hand
The gun at your waist
Can never keep me from loving you

I attempt to talk
But you always turn away
As though saying im less
pretending im not there

But the restrain in your eyes
The heart wrapped in ice
Can never keep me from loving you

I change myself daily
The curls in my hair
The colors of my mood
Never seems to catch your attention

But ignorance you show
The lack of observation
Can never keep me from loving you

I see you in the hallway
laughing with other girls
Do I have to be like them
mimic what they do?

But the light in your eyes
The smile on your lips
keeps me loving you

you glance my way
and beckon me over
your eyes burning brighter
your smile stretching wider

have the clouds covered my eyes
and made me not see?
The whole time you, too, kept loving me
©2008-2009 ~UchihaTiger
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ehhh, i dont write poetry too often...but since my art doesnt appeal to me right now i will give you a poem =]
ill work on my drawings
i just got photoshop and flash
so once i find out how to use em better ill post some stuff
but i cant make linearts :(
so i mess it all up...
grrrrrrrism.

OH! and im writing another story, no fanfic this time. my thought to be alone story has been on hold, cause im workin on this, and i cant think of stuff lol, so tell me if you want me to post my other story. its called "a taste of insanity" idk if i want that to be the title, but i do want to write something that goes to that, BUUT its about...nope, i wont even tell you :D
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~lemora16:iconlemora16: Jan 19, 2008, 4:37:31 PM
Ahh its so beautiful....and your so mean! Giving me just a little of what you are going to write about...tut tut tut *teasing*

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~UchihaTiger:iconUchihaTiger: Jan 20, 2008, 10:11:35 AM
thank you!
lol, ahhhh well....do you want me to note you the first chapter?
i will be nice and send it just for you if you want it :D

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~lemora16:iconlemora16: Jan 21, 2008, 11:26:23 AM
Ahhh! Even better if you want you can send it to my email. weiss2cool@hotmail.com. Your so nice! :glomp:

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S-E-I-G-A-K-U If you are a fan of Prince of Tennis then this is the place to be. hehe
There is only one rule in life: Leave the past in the past....and move on to the future - Me '07
~UchihaTiger:iconUchihaTiger: Jan 21, 2008, 5:18:30 PM
okies, i sent it to you
...
if you dont get it tell me
and ill send it on here :D
and thnx lol
:hug:

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If it's hard to look back, and your scared to look ahead, look beside you and I will be there.
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*If you have attempted a jutsu by performing hand seals or using scrolls, copy and paste this into your signature
~lemora16:iconlemora16: Jan 21, 2008, 6:54:06 PM
And your welcome thanks I will let you know. Oh thank you I did get it! ^_^ Thanks so much!

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S-E-I-G-A-K-U If you are a fan of Prince of Tennis then this is the place to be. hehe
There is only one rule in life: Leave the past in the past....and move on to the future - Me '07
~UchihaTiger:iconUchihaTiger: Jan 21, 2008, 7:02:07 PM
:D
youre welcome
tell me what you think of it please

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If it's hard to look back, and your scared to look ahead, look beside you and I will be there.
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*If you have attempted a jutsu by performing hand seals or using scrolls, copy and paste this into your signature
~lemora16:iconlemora16: Jan 21, 2008, 7:05:20 PM
Okay so far I think its really really good I love the plot and the story line. I even have a special folder for it. ^_^ I'll edit if you like too.

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S-E-I-G-A-K-U If you are a fan of Prince of Tennis then this is the place to be. hehe
There is only one rule in life: Leave the past in the past....and move on to the future - Me '07
~UchihaTiger:iconUchihaTiger: Jan 21, 2008, 7:31:29 PM
lol
im honored to have a folder XD
yessss please, i make a lot of mistakes...and i spell worth crap
lmao
annnndddddd, if you want ill keep sending you the next chapters
when you want them
i think im on.......chapter 4 maybe?
so if you would, would you help me?
i get writers block easily.......:D

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If it's hard to look back, and your scared to look ahead, look beside you and I will be there.
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*If you have attempted a jutsu by performing hand seals or using scrolls, copy and paste this into your signature
~lemora16:iconlemora16: Jan 21, 2008, 9:47:32 PM
Certainly I would love to help you and send the chapters ^_^ I'll edit them and send them back. ^_^

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S-E-I-G-A-K-U If you are a fan of Prince of Tennis then this is the place to be. hehe
There is only one rule in life: Leave the past in the past....and move on to the future - Me '07
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